Photo prompt provided by Louise with The Storyteller’s Abode. Thank you Louise!
The colours drew him into another world and he was lost. Lost in the most beautiful of escapes. The painting was exquisite. The subtle touches of light against dark, the soft brush strokes conveying the tone of the entire painting; tranquility.
The chatter of people brought him back to the real world. For once he was glad to be in the world of the living. He was next in line to have the antiquity examined at the travelling roadshow of experts. The sun was out, the surrounding fields a spring green. Like a painting. He smiled to himself. He was a living subject of this delicate work of art.
Passed down through his grandmother, it was hidden in the corridors and attics of his family. He needed expert confirmation. Because if it was authentic, it would mean an undiscovered masterpiece.
The expert in arts and literatures bent to examine the canvas, the signature and the layers of paint. He frowned, then straightened slowly, his mouth numbly conveying the sweetest words. “It’s a Monet…”
173 words
Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) where the challenge is to write 100 to 175 words based on the prompt. Click the link to view more stories.
Wow! What a great ending! Such a lovely story! He has a priceless painting!
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Wouldn’t we all love to discover that antique that is worth a small fortune. Lol. Thanks for reading.
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Yes!! 😀 😀
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Would love to find an old painting hidden away I’m the loft and discover it was worth millions! Nice take.
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Thank you Iain😊
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Great story and I love your take. And the ending.
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Thank you for reading. And your feedback too is most appreciated!
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I like a happy ending and they come much happier than this! Absolutely delightful.
My tale is called ‘One beautiful day’
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Thank you Keith!
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such a discovery! all the sweeter i suppose as it was loved before it became a treasure. lovely story
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Thank you for reading 😊
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My pleasure!
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I love Monet’s style, well done
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Thank you Michael. I do too 😊
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I wonder how many more paintings are hidden away, waiting to be discovered? Lovely story!
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Thank you Chris!
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I enjoyed your story. The start of a larger piece? Or a movie? The world awaits, Fatima.
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Oh thank you so much Ted!
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LOL Great story. I am still searching for the priceless treasure my family left for me. They have hidden it well. 😉
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Oooh, it’s an undiscovered masterpiece! Loved this 🙂
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I’m so very glad you did!
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What a wonderful and uplifting story. The guy has a Monet. Priceless, your story too.
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Felt like doing something more cheery. Thank you Neel. 😊
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