Desert dawn

PHOTO PROMPT Β© Jan Wayne Fields

“C’mon! It will be worth it.”

“This was a bad idea, Dawn.”

“Oh stop your moaning. Just a few more steps.”

Robert screwed up his eyes against the morning sun, “It’s at least half a kilometre up! You’re going to kill me.”

Dawn trod easily over the rocks. Behind her, he watched the muscles flex in her calves.

At the top of the hill they looked out across the spreading desert glowing a pinkish-orange from the rising sun.

“What did I tell you? Isn’t it beautiful?”

Watching her face, his breath caught by the wind, he whispered, “It sure is.”

100 words

Written for Friday Ficitioneers where the challenge is to write a story in 100 words or less, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Click the blue frog to read more flash fiction.

Thanks to Jan Wayne Fields for providing this week’s prompt.

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38 thoughts on “Desert dawn

  1. I love the way you make it clear from Robert’s reaction to what he saw in Dawn’s face that she was having a transcendent experience as she watched the light of the rising sun spreading across the desert. What a lovely moment to share!

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