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Flux23 dropped to her knees, panting on the rooftop of the skyscraper. In seconds she morphed from a suit-wearing white male into herself. Brown hair and pale skin. A blue scaly patch behind her ear the only tell-tale sign of what she was.
The city lights blurred in front of her. She felt woozy. That little girl caught her unawares, staring at her, then at her father lying in a pool of blood. She threw the gun into an air vent. They’ll catch up to her. She would run anyway. Her life as an assassin for Nation444 was over.
99 words
Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words of less. Thanks to Jill Wisoff for this week’s prompt!
Every week I intend to write comedy, and everything but comedy finds its way onto the post. This week, it is sci-fi. Shapeshifters. Loosely based on the X-men character, Mystique.
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I think she still has a chance
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I hope so.
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A gripping action scene.
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Thank you, Iain. 🙂
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Good, tense writing there, Fatima! I hope that life can be over for her, though it rarely is.
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She’s set on a new path for sure. In the end, I think she makes it 😉 Thank you, Dale.
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Well crafted.
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Thank you, YN 🙂
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Now I want to know what Nation444 is.
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I’d like to know more about them as well and Flux23
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Me and you both! If I take a guess, they’d be some kind of dictatorship enslaving mutants for their own greed and destruction. Flux23 would be one of many mutants enslaved to this regime.
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You captured her tense situation beautifully. Well crafted story.
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I’m really glad you think so, Susan!
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The life as an assassin is not fun when you have to face your conscious
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conscience I meant
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In a way she is discovering herself and who she wants to be. And assassin was not it.
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A tense action thriller.
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Thank you 🙂
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Brilliant, the tension is palpable.
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Thank you, Keith!
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Dear Fatima,
It sounds like Flux23 discovered her conscience. Not a good thing for an assassin. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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She is set for a different path from now on and will have to fight for it. Thank you, Rochelle.
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At least this alien has a conscience – or develops one.
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It was always there, I suppose, just she was forced into being an assassin by Nation444. And she couldn’t do it anymore.
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I get the impression that you don’t retire as an assassin for Nation444, and neither are you made redundant. Terminated sounds more likely…
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That’s exactly it, Penny! Enslaved by Nation444 and now she wants out and will have to fight for it! And I suppose in the process, free the rest of the enslaved mutants and probably start a revolution.. (wow, the story is developing!) Thank you, Penny.
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Write it! Write it! Write the story!
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This is such an imaginative take on the prompt. I’ve always been fascinated by the idea of shape-shifters. Good one.
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Thank you, Granonine. 🙂 Shape-shifters are very intriguing!
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Clever choice of name for her! I do love a shape-shifter. Well done.
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Thank you, Jilly! I struggled with it, but glad I found one that worked.
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Very gripping.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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An exciting tale! I love mystique in Xmen. Seems like they have increased her role in the recent movies.
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A shape-shifting Alien, an exciting plot, tense and well-paced writing. What’s not to like? 🙂
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This was a story which left me wanting to know more, great
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