PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz
His question caught her off-guard. The room spun around her and she gripped the edges of the lectern to steady herself.
“Ms Silver, how would you explain the Hannah May incident?”
It was no secret that she had been Hannah’s life coach. A fact that tormented her. Buried guilt rose from past failures. Oversights.
It was she who had encouraged her to push past her fears, return to her love of sailing. She died in the storm of 2004. Neither sailboat nor her body was ever found.
Ms Silver found her voice, “Hannah May was brave enough to follow her dreams.”
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Life coaches are amazingly positive people. And I’m sure they have their demons too. Ones they wrestle with and from which they find their own growth. Whatever the situation, it’s important to face fears that keep you from your dreams or the change you want to make in your life.
Have a happy Wednesday!
Maybe your best life coach is yourself. It’s a lot of responsibility to guide people in certain directions but fundamentally I don’t believe Ms Silver made Hannah do anything she didn’t sincerely want to do.
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I don’t think Ms Silver is to blame. And you’re right when Hannah did what she wanted. I was thinking about fears and growth, and this is the story that came out. I guess what happens when it seems our deepest fears have been realised? Do we let it conquer us or continue with what’s important to us anyway? Ms Silver’s response is the answer, I think.
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Dear Fatima,
Hannah May died doing what she wanted to do. A pity it ended badly, but Ms. Silver certainly isn’t to blame as far as I can see. A very rich story in a few words. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I agree, it was good intentions and in the end what was meant to happen, happened. Thank you, Rochelle.
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Too often we blame ourselves for things in which we have no control. This is definitely one of them. Hannah May died doing what she wanted!
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And it can haunt us forever, very unnecessarily.
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Clever story, nicely done.
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Thank you 🙂
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Poor Ms Silver. A lot of guilt to carry around but I hope she can see that it was not her fault.
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It is something she needs to confront within herself and work through, just as she does with her clients. Thank you, Iain.
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Very well written. As you said in the other comments, Ms. Silver is not to blame for anything.
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Thank you, Trent 🙂
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Fatima, I really liked how your explored the philosophical issues here and weighed up our accountability or is it responsibility for others. My take also grapples with guilt: https://beyondtheflow.wordpress.com/2018/07/26/guilty-friday-fictioneers/
I’d be interested to hear your thoughts on my scenario.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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I’m glad you liked it. I was trying to look at things from a life coach’s perspective. They’re the ones always encouraging us to face our inner demons, untangle mental knots. What happens when their own demons crop up? I’m excited to read yours!
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Well, Hannah went out, found her dream, and the ending leaves the ones behind feeling the remorse.
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IT’s interesting to see people’s reactions. I had expected some comments along the lines of ‘playing it safe’ in life. Good to see people are very brave and encouraging about pursuing dreams and what’s important to them. Thank you for your comment!
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Great story! I love the themes of facing your fears and personal growth. It’s something I whole-heartedly believe in.
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Thank you, Jenny! It’s something that’s close to my heart too. If we’re not growing, we’re dying as they say.
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Absolutely. And dying blindly.
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Sometimes following a dream means taking risks… I assume that Hannah might have overdosed if she didn’t
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What a thought-provoking comment! Could you elaborate on why she would have overdosed if she didn’t return to sailing? I’m keen to hear more of your thoughts.
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“Buried guilt rose from past failures. Oversights.”
These words at the heart of your story suggest that Ms Silver did more than just encourage Hannah May to overcome her fears and sail again. Something that she failed to do haunts her, and her answer to the questioner was, to that extent, dishonest. Did she know, perhaps, that Hannah would freeze at the moment of crisis? You artfully leave us guessing.
Really well written, Fatima!
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I did hint at something Ms Silver might have overlooked. Exactly what it was, I’m not too sure myself. Perhaps she blames herself for not realising there were signs of incapacity somehow, mental illness (another favourite theme of mine), or lack of sailing skills (though she used to sail before and maybe suffered some trauma). Or perhaps Ms Silver feels responsible but is not really to blame as she couldn’t have known any better. Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Penny!
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I’m not a life coach, but I am a counselor. I can tell you that you have to learn to leave the failures; learn from them, but refuse to carry them with you. It would be too much of a burden, across a lifetime. Instead, rejoice in the successes.
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There is only so much one can do. It is not your mind after all, but someone else’s. I’m glad you are able to relate to this because your experience speaks volumes.
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Love this! How different!
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Thank you, Sascha!
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A pity the way it ended for Hannah, but Ms Silver did the right thing, encouraging her to live her dreams.
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Dreams are about taking risks after all. Thank you 🙂
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Great piece. It’s unfortunate that Ms Silver feels she has to live with the guilt but she’s right, Hannah died doing what she loved. We could get hit by a bus tomorrow so avoiding the things we love because the might be dangerous is rarely a good enough reason.
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We have to weigh the risks and benefits, but the if it calls to you – do it for sure. Thank you Carol.
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It’s sad that Hannah died but then not many people are lucky to follow their dreams. Nice one.
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SO true, she was lucky to have experienced her passion one last time.
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A bit of a stretch as a response to the photo, but you make it work.
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Thanks for commenting Keigh. Well the image is just a prompt which depending on the writer can inspire any story. There’s no limit. The dock and the boats in the background led to thoughts of sailing and it sailed from there! I think it worked out well too.
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she died in pursuit of her dream. nothing wrong with that.
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there are many who do the same, they follow their pursuit with passion and on into the extreme – brave souls.
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They are courageous indeed!
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i like Silver, she did what she thought was right and a tragic accident occurred, this happens. Great writing by the way
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Thank you so much! We can only do our best with the info and resources we have at the time.
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Yes, well said. Good story.
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Say, are you familiar with the movie ‘Adrift’, Fatima? The author lives here in Friday Harbor.
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I am not familiar with it, but a quick google search has my mouth wide open. I pictured Hannah May caught in a storm / hurricane of some sort. Weird coincidence. Thank you for the image, Ted!
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That’s what I thought happened with Hanna. Tami is still sailing. The movie is a good one.
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Dreams seen with open eyes are often dangerous. Delightfully different.
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Thank you, YS!
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Life is full of risks. Better to die trying than not to ever try at all though. A nice tale!
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I agree. Here’s to our dreams!
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Aw, poor Ms. Silver. I was really rooting for her. Very well-written.
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Thank you so much, Lisa!
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