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Egg yolk dripped down the Range Rover’s windscreen. Sweat dripped down the side of Joanna’s face. Turned out hurling eggs was tiring. Would the sight of his egg-covered car be enough to make Nick’s blood boil? A part of her felt bad. But, Nick should know his cheating days are over.
Joanna knew she could make him happier than that cow ever did. His indecisiveness drove her mad. That’s why she had to help him decide. Leave your wife, Nick. Choose me. I told you she was crazy, Nick. See what she did to your car?
Joanna threw another egg.
100 words
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Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less. Click the frog to submit your flash fiction and read what others’ have written.
Fajr, Books & That First Cuppa 
That is a great story! So brief yet is says so much! Funny because I have an idea for a book I want to write and it is around “cheating”. Since that is kind of cliche for a book I have to figure out a good twist for the plot. Have a good day!
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Hi there! Thank you so much for you kind feedback. I’m still learning the craft of storytelling myself so it’s always really nice to read positive comments. Cheating is common in books, true. But I think you’re off to a great start in working out a more complex plot. Good Luck and Happy Writing.
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Beautifully crafted
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Thank you so much, Neil!
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I’m not sure Joanna’s the best judge of who’s crazy 🙂
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haha! True, she doesn’t have the bird’s eye view on that.
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if joanna isn’t careful, the egg would be on her face.
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I don’t think it will end well, either.
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Dear Fatima,
Draliman took the words right from under my fingers. I’d say Joanna doesn’t have a lot of room to call Nick’s wife crazy. 😉 Well crafted story from the other woman’s POV.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yep, she is definitely the one who flipped in the story. Thank you for the amazing feedback. I’m so thrilled!
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Nice one. Joanna’s quite a live wire.
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Definitely dangerous to be around. Thank you, Anthony.
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Nick can sure pick ’em… He would be well advised to cut all ties with Joanna I think.
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He picked an egg-head alright!
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Seems like he is going to get way more than he bargained for…good!
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Karma’s so good like that isn’t she?
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Haha! Sunnyside up from now on. Great revenge tale.
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Thank you, Paula!
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I liked the twist in the end, I fear Joanna’s brains are scrambled by rage.
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Haha! Thank you!
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“I dug my key into the side
Of his pretty little souped-up four-wheel drive
Carved my name into his leather seats
I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights
I slashed a hole in all four tires
Maybe next time he’ll think before he cheats.”
I have always loved this song — and now it’s stuck in my head for the day — but you’ve definitely given it a new twist! Good writing job.
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Amazing! I actually had that song in my head as I wrote it. Thanks, Eugenia.
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Ah, Nick you messed up. Best to get out before it is too late – these women are crazy.
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He will reap what he sowed!
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Tricky plot there. Who knows how far she’s willing to take it! Sounds like Fatal Attraction. Good writing with a good twist.
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I think she’s just getting started. Thank you!
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🙂
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This was so good, Fatima (I didn’t even realise this was you!)
I’m thinking he should stay way… she is not firing n all cylinders…
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Errr Thanks, Dale, I think! Haha! Seriously though I appreciate the awesome feedback. Getting my game on!
She’s definitely misfiring on something. Keep far away.
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No, no. I meant your blog! You changed it.
Looks nice. 😊
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Oh! Thank you, Dale. It is evolving 😉
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I love the visual of the egg dripping and the sweat dripping down her face! There is a steaminess coming through in her anger and heat! Beautifully done
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